hard_nonsense ([info]hard_nonsence) wrote,
@ 2005-01-31 12:23:00
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Above the ground.
Above the Ground:

Quite moment, fragile peace
Inside of words we all beleive

Steady silence, waiting through
Trusting me to see the truth

Peace of hope, this faith, this love
Children of the living God

We all will shudder falling down
Pray, "Lift me up Lord, above ground."



Quite truth, long unbeleived
Where is the God I know I need

Where is the love to fill me up
I've fallen down, I'm waking up

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wow....
(Anonymous)
2005-01-31 06:54 pm UTC (link)
Bruce,

That is really something. The rhymes and rythms are excellent. I'm not sure I completely understand what the poem is saying, but it seems very strong, nontheless. Great job.

-Frank

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[info]5thpickney
2005-02-11 11:18 pm UTC (link)
I like this one too! I get it. I feel like this sometimes too, but remember that He is with us always. Check out my poems on the Tower of Babel www.madbull4.net/testblog

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