Okay, here it is. Alright, here is the fifth chapter of my novel, and if you thought this took a long time wait until you see chapter 6. I hope you enjoy, and please, please, please, give me some comments on this I can use. Even I realize this is ackward in places, I just can't seem to fix it. HELP !!!!!
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